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在开头就看到了结尾=w=  发表于 2013-5-3 18:50
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发表于 2013-4-26 21:46:28 | 显示全部楼层
我想从头学

能从头教吗

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发表于 2013-4-26 22:43:55 | 显示全部楼层
英语渣到不可救药的少年也来拜师了      求收徒!!         
b站的那个听力。。。。只听懂了几个单词,文章要看→查词→看→查词→看。。。死循环啊!

求十三师傅,二姐大人调教啊!
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发表于 2013-5-3 18:40:58 | 显示全部楼层
@十三点君_tREcE 好像看到你说今天就忙完了来着..
忙完了的话求问一下开头结尾怎么写Orz 每次都写不好
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发表于 2013-5-3 18:45:34 | 显示全部楼层

西西你就这么喜欢让我工作么 (讨厌(瞥。
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十三点君_tREcE 发表于 2013-5-3 18:45
西西你就这么喜欢让我工作么 (讨厌(瞥。

不回答也没事儿_(:3」∠)_
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纪西子 发表于 2013-5-3 18:50
不回答也没事儿_(:3」∠)_
【爬走

_(:3」∠)_  其实我也是写开头结尾的苦手 嘤嘤
其实开头结尾内容可以很像
开头就好像,我要开始说话之前的铺垫啊,
比如。。。从以前开始这个事情就一直被流传。。+主旨statement +我今天来表达三个PRO

结尾的话。。 这三个理由会让statement更丰富。。让世界更美好(pia

= = 专注托福作文的话这种是万用 的 。。。学术的话就以后再说=w=
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十三点君_tREcE 发表于 2013-5-3 18:55
_(:3」∠)_  其实我也是写开头结尾的苦手 嘤嘤
其实开头结尾内容可以很像
开头就好像,我要开始说话之前 ...

好像跟我想的差不多=-=
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纪西子 发表于 2013-5-3 19:00
好像跟我想的差不多=-=

能做到这样就可以了=w=

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发表于 2013-5-5 16:07:55 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 ZeroCu_ 于 2013-5-6 21:15 编辑

這次的是先用中文寫一次,再用英文寫
應該會好一些了(上次的連自己也不敢直視…
話說這是要做presentation的說…之後還要和老師、同學對話(這就即興發揮好了…
戳一下~
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[fold=作文菌~]

  Maybe talking abu it is too early for us. Iwould like to talking about prattime in aborad. When I go home, My family always ask me plan of future after graduation. Staying in China or come back Taiwan? In fact, I don't have any idea. In the same time, theyrecomed me a new plan of graduation- parttime in abroad.Alhough this plan isnt a long plan. I feel this way hae worth to consider, but ths way may be too difficult with me.

  First of all, migrant labr's age must less than 30 years old. Second of all, must pass language vantage exam and take sne certificate. In a general way, people go to USA, Canada, Australia or UK. It sound a little like peasant- workr in China.

  We don't talking about slary. Ithink this is a opportunity that we can move toward the world.Anyway, Iguess uouth is pretty good. Mabe thisshort presentation can't help everyone understand about parttime in abroad. However, Ihope it can add a choie after graduation. Thank you.

怎麼打到電腦就覺得好少OTZ
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今天給同學看了作文…文法錯誤貌似有十多個OTZ
不知道還有沒有問題(蹲)
[fold=改過…(蹲)]
  Maybe to talk about  it is to early for us. Iwould like to talk about parttimein abroad. When i go home, my faily always ask me about plan of future after graduate. Stay in Ghina or go back to Taiwan? In fact, Idon't have any idea. At the same time, they recommed me a new plan of graduation- parttimein abroad.Although this plan isn'ta long plan. Ifeel this way have wort to consider, butthis way is too difficult for me.

  First, migrant laber's age must less than 30 years old. Second, must pass language vantage exam and take some certificate. In a general way, people go to USA, Canada, Australis or UK. Itsound like peasat-worker in China.

  We don't talking about salary. Ithink this opportunity can help ous broaden horizon. We can experience different culture for ourselves.

  I guess may be this short presetation can't help everyone understand about parttime in abroad. However, hope it can be a newchoice after graduation. Thank you.
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順便問一下…閱讀要先練泛讀還是先練精讀?OTZ  发表于 2013-5-5 16:42
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发表于 2013-5-8 02:42:23 | 显示全部楼层
Title: compare and contrast Australian and Chinese high school education

   In elementary education, Australia follows a current method to educate students whilst China utilizes traditional approach to help children become successful learners. This essay will compare and contrast Chinese and Australian high school education about teaching methodology, the high school curriculums and the time spent at school.
   Firstly, Chinese and Australian high school teaching styles appear to be different but also similar in some aspects. The noteworthy difference is the class atmosphere of these two countries. The atmosphere of Australia is quite relaxing and casual while Chinese is formal and serious. In Australia, most of the teachers would take full use of the classroom, sitting on the desk, or even having class outdoor. This might be for checking whether the entire students understand what they’ve learnt or not. By contrast, in China, teachers remain in the front of the class just for watching all of the students. Another difference is that Australian students contribute to the discussion and are expected to ask questions. However, Chinese teachers want students to rise questions only when they are told to, for example, if the class is interrupted by asking questions without teachers permission, it is generally considered as rude in China. In addition, both countries have rules of respecting teachers and classmates which are done differently. The children of Australia are not required to stand up when teachers enter the classroom but Chinese students do. After all, these two countries use different ways for one goal, which is to make students study well enough. Although Chinese always want children to grow up as a high-qualified talent and Australian want children to develop more hobbies and become creative.
   Secondly, there are both some remarkable similarities and differences of high school curriculums. Both countries have compulsory subjects, English for Australia while Chinese, math and English for China, and all students need to pass the exams for graduation. Besides, students are able to choose at least 90 selective courses to learn. Unfortunately students in China cannot make the decision. Instead the educators in China determined it objectively. It is the traditional opinion that these subjects can bring the necessary knowledge and skills to students. On the other hand, Australians mainly aim at cultivating independent thinking which means students can make their own choice.
   Thirdly, the time spent at school seems different but also similar. The similarity is both of these two countries’ students should attend school 5 days per week, from Monday to Friday, the difference is the school year. Australian students are only required to attend high school for 4 year that means they could leave school before 17 years old. Chinese students always spend 6 years in high school and thus, they might be even 20 when they graduate. Another difference is the length of the holidays. For instance, Austria has 12 weeks per year, from Dec. the 22nd to Jan. the 28th in summer, Mar. the 29th   to Apr. the 14th in autumn, Jun. the 29th to Jul. the 14th in winter and Sep. the 21st  to Oct. the 6th  in spring. But China just has 8 weeks during the summer and winter. This could because of the attitude to the life. Australian spend more time on relaxing and adjustment during the vacations while most Chinese prefer working or studying so that they can survive in the social competition.
    In conclusion, this essay points out the differences and similarities between Chinese and Australian high school education in three aspects. Firstly, these two countries use different ways to help students become a successful learner, secondly the curriculums are different because of the different goals, at last, and the two countries have different holidays.


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这篇GJ _(:з」∠)_ 我终于想到要来看了  发表于 2013-5-27 03:59
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這次的是先用中文寫一次,再用英文寫
應該會好一些了(上次的連自己也不敢直視…
話說這是要做presentati ...



这个问题还是很多的 _(:з」∠)_

有些是句型有点奇怪我知道这个年代有点久远你还需要改的话我再帮你好好看看。
问一句parttime in abroad是什么意思
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这个问题还是很多的 _(:з」∠)_

有些是句型有点奇怪我知道这个年代有点久远你还需要改的话我再帮你好 ...

............OTZ
乃好忙的感觉...
如果忙的话就算了(揉肩
之后还有改过了(虽然问题还是很多...
晚一点再打上来0w0
part time abourd
在国外打工...
发现这个问题只是前不久的事...OTZ
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............OTZ
乃好忙的感觉...
如果忙的话就算了(揉肩

如果有空的话可以打上来我现在开始又可以接客了 (啥。

唔 那我再仔细看一下你的文
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ZeroCu_ 发表于 2013-5-27 06:51
............OTZ
乃好忙的感觉...
如果忙的话就算了(揉肩

Maybe to talk about  it is to early for us. Iwould like to talk about parttimein abroad. When i go home, my faily always ask me about plan of future after graduate. Stay in Ghina or go back to Taiwan? In fact, Idon't have any idea. At the same time, they recommed me a new plan of graduation- parttimein abroad.Although this plan isn'ta long plan. Ifeel this way have wort to consider, butthis way is too difficult for me.

我始终觉得part time abroad有点怪,是这样的一次词语嘛? 是的话就没差,不是的话换成working abroad比较顺吧
maybe是副词 理论上不能独立当主语的说 至少要跟一个名词
所以第一句:
Maybe it's (noun) too early for us to talk about part time in abroad.

第二句有点神奇的是没有时态 写作文最简单的是用过去式呢w
graduate是动词 of/to/after 这类+动词是要+ing的...
My family was always asking me about a plan of future after greaduating from college when I went home.

你的句型结构有问题的说 _(:з」∠)_
stay 作为独立动词不能撑起一疑问句的说,可以改成 I have no idea whether I should stay in Ghina or go back to Taiwan
I don't have any IDEAS ← 要加s 因为any形容的是复数

一样是时态的问题: In the same time, they recommended me a new plan after graduation - ______.

最后一句我没懂你的意思的说~ 是说虽然这不是一个长久的计划,但是这是一个又困难又有价值的计划嘛?

  First, migrant laber's age must less than 30 years old. Second, must pass language vantage exam and take some certificate. In a general way, people go to USA, Canada, Australis or UK. Itsound like peasat-worker in China.

must + be =>  must be younger than 30 years old
laber => labor
第二句话又没有主语了的说 must是动词前面要加 they 或者labors
我直接改了:
First of all, migrant labors shall not order than 30. Secondly, they must pass language tests and get their certicicates from government. Most of the labors chose to go to _____________.

peasat??? 是说peasant嘛?还是 =-=

  We don't talking about salary. I think this opportunity can help ous broaden horizon. We can experience different culture for ourselves.

do + 动词原型的
这一整句你要表达的意思是什么 _(:з」∠)_

  I guess maybe this short presetation can't help everyone understand about parttime in abroad. However, hope it can be a new choice after graduation. Thank you.

_(:з」∠)_这篇文章没有说服力的说
要做presentation的话少用maybe  I guess这样的词。...

再改一下 么么哒


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