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手机粗略看了一下十三老师改的好棒！！！辛苦了！！！
回家再电脑仔细看_(:3」∠)_
唔好久没写作文了所 ...

没关系慢慢来一步步加油你其实写之前可以先打个草稿
比如列出开头中心思想+2个CON和1个PRO+结尾。结尾=开头的变形加深。^^ 可以慢慢练。

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十三点君_tREcE 发表于 2013-3-18 08:13
没关系慢慢来一步步加油你其实写之前可以先打个草稿
比如列出开头中心思想+2个CON和1个PRO+结尾 ...

了解了！我会努力（把老师折腾的腰疼）的！

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我。。。我忘了能在二姐师傅其他楼点评回复二姐师傅。。。。囧。。我就想着在你点评下面回复你看不到提醒。。。。。
翻了下。。木有二姐师傅其他的回复。。除了第一楼其他都是点评中。。。。

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你点评我能收的到的发表于 2013-3-18 09:25

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十三点君_tREcE 发表于 2013-3-18 01:07

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Tittle: __________________________.More bodies are ...

= =这里英语最差的估计是我了……
= =好难啊…………|||| 果然国内考试选择题不科学，根本不是真水平= =

Tittle: President Obama prepares for his serimony of sweling in today.More bodies are found at an Algerian natural gas_ complex.

I'm David Deforest reporting from _Washington__.

U.S. President Barack Hossein_Obama_ takes a ceremonial _of over...___ of office today at the U.S. _capital__ building, as many as _80,000__ people are expected to crowd to the National Mall to _witness_the .....__

Mr. Obama took the _offical own__ on Sunday, because the U.S. __……_____ mandates the president be sworn in on January 20th.

VOA's Kent Klein at the White House gives us a look at Obama family's activities.

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发表于 2013-3-18 14:04:53 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层

……还要徒弟么……

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其实日常作业我会在帖子里更新大家及时来看就可以了群号是60971812 二姐周末估计会开课就这样ww 发表于 2013-3-19 03:36

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我也想當徒弟的說0-0
我的程度的話…老實說我不太知道…就當是全廢好了~~

今天已經報了四級的說(好像到六月底考…
日標是下學期考BEC的中高級~!!!

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了解的說~!!! 发表于 2013-3-19 14:18

60971812 这个是群号发表于 2013-3-19 02:51

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Tittle: _ The President Obama prepares for his ceremonial swearing in today __.More bodies are found at an Algerian _natural gas _ complex.

I'm David Deforest reporting from __Washington__.

U.S. President __Barack Obama __ takes a ceremonial _oath __ of office today at the U.S. _

Capitol__ building, as many as _800，000_ people are expected to crowd to the National Mall to __witness the event__
Mr. Obama took the __official oath___ on Sunday, because the U.S. __constitution___ mandates the president be sworn in on January 20th.

VOA's Kent Klein at the White House gives us a look at Obama family's activities.

听了至少10遍以上。。。
= = 果然水平太低了。。 TUT
有些乱拼的，查了下字典居然有。。那。。。大概。。就是正确的单词吧。。望天。。。

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十三点君_tREcE 发表于 2013-3-18 01:07

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Tittle: __________________________.More bodies are ...

Tittle: President Obama prepares for his ceremonial swearing today. More bodies are found at an Algerian natural gas complex.

I'm David Deforest reporting from Washington.

U.S. President Barack Obama takes a ceremonial oath of office today at the U.S. capital building, as many as eight hundred thousand people are expected to crowd to the National Mall to witness the event

Mr. Obama took the official oath on Sunday, because the U.S. constitution mandates the president be sworn in on January 20th.

VOA's Kent Klein at the White House gives us a look at Obama family's activities.

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