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幸好我看过school days 啊不然肯定完全不知道在干吗_(:3」∠)_
所以看过还是能猜到一些的(根据情节Orz
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没开弹幕看完了
幸好我看过school days 啊不然肯定完全不知道在干吗_(:3」∠)_
所以看过还是能猜到一些 ...

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Australia education high school education is a few hundred years old whilst china adopted the western system in 1949. This essay will, however, not comparison and contrast all different and similar between these two countries, but will limit itself to education; by firstly,
China and Australia appear to be different; moreover, the noteworthy difference is the high school teaching styles from these two countries. Firstly, the former’s classroom atmosphere is informal and relaxed whilst latter is formal; for instance, teacher may move around room, sit on tables, have some classes outdoor in Australia; however, Chinese teacher just teach on the platform, may be because they can see the whole class at the front of the class. Another additional difference is students contribute to discuss and expected to ask questions in Australia, but Chinese students just listen and answer questions asked by teacher. Finally, both countries have rules for the classroom and students have to respect the teachers; however, this is done different between two countries. The children of Australia never stand up when teacher enter the room whilst Chinese do it. (rewrite1的时候加理由) Therefore,(…..)

therefore后面就不知道可以写什么了。。感觉写得很渣写不下去。。相同点不知道怎么开头  第一段introduction的scope不知道该怎么写 一团糟一团糟 要rewrite2遍后天就要交了
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Australia education high school education is a few hundred years old whilst china adopted the wester ...

我试着改一下哦,我不知道你要写啥,然后是要交什么作业主题是啥0 0.

Australia education high school education is a few hundred years old whilst china adopted the western system in 1949.
这句话什么意思0 0 我没看懂呢。..
所以我改成:Australia Education is few hundred years old while China adopeted the western educational system only in the year of 1949.
如果意思不对请提出来
This essay will, however, not comparison and contrast all different and similar between these two countries, but will limit itself to education.
Firstly/first of all, China and Australia appear to be different(哪里different?写清楚吧).
Moreover, the noteworthy difference is the high school teaching styles from these two countries.

Firstly(重复了, the former’s classroom atmosphere is informal and relaxed whilst latter is formal; for instance, teacher may move around room, sit on tables, have some classes outdoor in Australia; however, Chinese teacher just teach on the platform, may be because they can see the whole class at the front of the class.

Maybe it's not because they can SEE the whole class; rather than that, maybe it's a tradition..
不是formal和informal,没有classroom是不formal的,只能说the study environment is different.
First of all, the Classroom environment appears to be different between two countries. In Australia, most of the teachers would use the full classroom space to move around, sit on tables, or even have some classes outdoor; while in China, teachers would use a single-mode teaching style:具体描述一下w

Another additional difference is that students contribute to discuss and expected to ask questions in Australia, but Chinese students just listen and answer questions asked by teacher.

contribute to the discussion and are expected to ..
你要说的是老师的不同的话这里就要用老师当例子了。不能说student just listen.而是teachers want student to answer when they are told to..这样。。

Finally, both countries have rules for the classroom and students have to respect the teachers; however, this is done different between two countries. The children of Australia never stand up when teacher enter the room whilst Chinese do it. (rewrite1的时候加理由) Therefore,(…..)


不是never stand up,是they are not required to ... 这是一种culture differences,那种invisible rule。
我觉得你应该focus on 那种teaching material的不同。。比如学科方面。。

只是粗略的改了一下你可以要交之前再给我看一遍。

理由
1 老师教学模式不同
2 学生/老师对老师/学生的期待不同:
    需不需要stand up ← 这个理由可以规在2里面
3 于是你还差一个理由?(大概
总结:
都有rule 都有好处和坏处?

以上 ^^


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我试着改一下哦,我不知道你要写啥,然后是要交什么作业主题是啥0 0.

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挺不错的地方那么。。还可以联系呢
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本帖最后由 纪西子 于 2013-4-7 19:56 编辑

@十三点君_tREcE 那啥 我好像好久没交作业了【跪
今天上课摸鱼写了这篇作文 打到电脑上我就去睡了ww【因为得禽流感了hhhh
PS 里面用了一个purify我在想我一定是PP看多了_(:3」∠)_
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Topic: Which of the following would you change to improve your health: 1.The kind of food you eat 2.The amount of exercise 3.The amount of stress



Today, people are going to pay most of attention on our health. We change the kind of food we eat, do more exercise, and even try our best to reduce the amount of stress. But which of them will help us the most? For me, I think we should stare at the stress. I will explain it in two aspects.

As all of them are important parts of our daily life, they all influence us a lot. To have food which are healthier will give us some substance we usually need. And to do more exercise will not only improve our health but also purify our mind. But stress often brings negative impact which is so strong that can destroy the systematical life style we have just built up by change the kind of food we eat and do more exercise.

So firstly, stress can cause health problem which can not be cured easily. Too much stress make people tired but they still have to force themselves to work or learn. Soon they feel headache easily and can not think anything. Actually, some kinds of headache even can nor be cured. Also the hypertension, which is a kind of disease can only be controlled but not totally cured. When people force themselves, the pressure of blood quickly increase. And when you feel stressful and sit to work all day without some activities, you may get the obesity caused by sedentary. Some people are likely to eat too much food when they have increase number of stress, this also cause obesity. So how could you overcome headache, hypertension and obesity easily? Why not just try to reduce the amount of stress during the daily life?

Secondly, stress also make you feel unhappy and don’t want to communicate with people. So you can not hold the social relationship during this situation. At work, you may meet trouble in dealing with various matters and communicating with boss and workmates. Or at school, you may reduce the efficiency, cause you can only deal with all things with yourself, without any help or cooperation. Finally, when you back home, you may anger while facing the family who are caring about you. You feel stressful and angry, and all of these will make the life even worse.

As the stress will cause such a great number of problems both in the body and the mind, why not try to change it? To do some activities to reduce the stress, you can avoid all of these occasions you will never want to face.

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仔细看了 喜欢就去申请 哪那么多顾虑 = =  发表于 2013-4-8 09:05
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用英語怎麼說?
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