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发表于 2015-8-6 20:30:57
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本帖最后由 eeeeeeeeeepeop 于 2015-8-6 20:43 编辑
Looking back to the anime scenes, Sentaro is a proficent jazz drummer
proficient
It is more a civilian style than the classicals
a-civilian-style
Otherwise, the "Jazz Kaoru" who practicing <Moanin'> with him should be absolutely his type,
这是otherwise虚拟语气，但跟这个没关系，who定语从句，写成了伴随状语，要不改成 who used to practice 或其他什么的一般现在时（是这样吧？）
[/quote]The original version was from the 1959 Rodgers and Hammerstein musical <The Sound of Music> and was a prevailing show tune.
这跟意思有关，1.was 应该是 is ，2. 改成定语从句比较好，不然意思有些错位.....
These are the things she selects to fill her mind with when times are bad, which ......
times are bad ，time is bad ....
Melody depicts a pictures of a little girl bounding up on a vast grassland while searching for her friends hiding under the reedland.
直接用reed (reedland可以这样组词吗，不太清楚.... 另pictures—picture
On the story's side, the triangle between three characters is a big clash for discussing the meaning of this song.
for改成when 如何？为什么用for呢，不太了解你的意思
but just a bit bluntness for notice her affections. notice—noticing
Then Kaoru comes as a pursuer for her,看了总感觉不对劲，pursuer for chasing her 或者 pursuer to her 你觉得如何 （我觉得你似乎很喜欢用for）
Then her thought of the things as her favorite, these would arising in her mind
would arise
For me, these are all my favorite things as well, plus the voice of your singing.
这个语序 as well 放句末
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