题目：
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，讲述上周你参加学校英文歌曲演唱比赛的过程。词数不少于60。
我的作文：
I have won the first prize at the school’s English song singing competition. This is the first time when I am on the stage, with a prize in my hand, and see a sense of audience applauding.
Things, which I still feel amazing of, started on Monday. As we were told the schedule of the competition, I felt excited—Because of my love to the music, and the interest to English. I was not confident about my ability. The bell went while I was thinking about it, and there came my teacher.”Li Hua, you have a good music talent, why not go and have a try? Just a try, don’t mind the result.”As I heard this from my teacher, I felt puzzled: I did have a sense of melody, but I just didn’t know how I could perform, But after a long struggle, I said:”I’ll have a try, thank you.”
Oh god! What had I permitted? I started crazy practicing, every day after class, I would appear in front of the radio, and sang to the music again and again. At last there was one thing to be thanked is I chose a beautiful song, and I really adore it.
Whatever I did, the last day had finally came. It was me that would sing the first turn. When I got the microphone, I repeatedly ease myself: Don’t worry, just like your song sang—
Whenever sing my songs/on the stage/on my own/Whenever said my words/Wishing they would be heard…
As the music was over, I was already calmed down. I went off the stage, and listened to others quietly.
Then the time of declaring who won prizes came. I heard my name, and went on the stage—that is the first time to show up as such a role for me. I felt my heart jumping, a voice was going around beside my ears:
Just a try, don’t mind the result.
老师说我不会写这样的文章……然后给了我一篇范文……一点文学价值都没有的范文……就是这个： Last Monday, our monitor announced to our class that an English Song Singing Competition would be held in the school auditorium on Friday afternoon. On hearing the news, some classmates signed up for it immediately. I was considering whether to participate when my English teacher approached and told me that it was a good chance to show off my talent. Encouraged by her, I decided to have a try.
During the following days, I practised the song I picked over and over again until I thought I was well prepared for the coming competition. Then came the big day. I did a really good job and won the first prize, which made me so excited.
By getting involved in the competition I gained more self-confidence and my English was improved a lot. This would certainly be one of the most memorable experiences for me!
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